An informal letter

An informal letter
Dear Zira
How have you been there? I hope you are doing well. I received an email from an educational club. They are asking me for suggestions about the qualities of a good manager. But I don’t know what to say. Let’s meet to exchange ideas before I write them.
Best wishes
Oydin

Formal letter

Dear Sir
I am writing this e-mail to express my feelings about the suggestions for a good manager. Recently, I heard about this news from an educational club. Firstly, I must admit that I am more than elated about it. On the one hand, punctuality is a crucial point for a manager. Furthermore, a good manager must be responsible. Moreover, it would be better if they are positive. It would be beneficial for both the candidate and Art Education Department if you allocate more attention to these qualities of a good manager. I hope you will do your best to satisfy the needs of my recommendations. I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully
Oydin