Design of a Mobile App for the Learning of Algorithms for University Students


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Dear author(s)
After reviewing article, I have the following recommendation so that your revised paper to be accepted:
Title:


Design of a Mobile App for the Learning of Algorithms for University Students




Introduction:
The introduction needs to be developed further to establish the justification/ importance of the new initiative and articulate the research problem and objective; these need to be linked explicitly to the associated issues and problems. The introduction would benefit from a succinct description of the paper and a stronger emphasis on the problem addressed by the research.
Introduction is not clearing the concepts or ideas that you want to present here.
Introduction is more general and more detailed, concise your introduction and focus on topic.


Suggestions for improvements:
The introduction part needs clear and understandable for the reader.
The introduction is written more generally, keep it more specific and to the point.
The flow of the introduction and literature is good, but I believe more literature analysis is needed.
There are spelling and grammatical mistakes in the paper, please review and rectify all spelling and grammatical errors, very poorly written article.
The quality of the images in the article is very poor.


Literature review
The LR section can be improved by including recent studies and identifying and drawing upon the critical body of knowledge relevant to the research, including learning theories. Overall, the literature review needs to be strengthened to emphasize the real-world significance of the issues addressed, and this informs the research design; the theoretical framework emerging from the literature review should relate to the research questions and points of emphasis.


Conclusion:
To enhance this section, reiterate the paper's purpose and state how the study has answered the research questions.


In general, the English in the present manuscript publication quality and requires not significant improvement.
Please carefully proof-read spell check to eliminate grammatical errors
In preparing a revised manuscript, please also include a table of how you have responded to each of the issues listed above point by point.
Dear AUTHOR, summarizing my feedback, I expect your contribution to be highly valued by the journal's readers if you improve it according to the review statements. I look forward to receiving your revised manuscript shortly.
With best regards,
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