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- 6.27 THE TELEPHONE Discuss the following statement. Before the advent of computers, the telephone was regarded as the most significant invention. INTRODUCTION
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In this essay, I have seen that without overpopulation and underdevelopment, poverty is not easily found. I have looked at education as one solution to the problem. We should accept that the solutions would require much time, effort, and money. 6.27 THE TELEPHONE Discuss the following statement. Before the advent of computers, the telephone was regarded as the most significant invention. INTRODUCTION There are many opinions on what should be regarded as the most significant invention before the computer. Let us look at the telephone in terms of a time- saving device and as a catalyst in the development of modern telecommunications. (39 words) BODY First, long-distance communication constitutes a substantial as well as indispensable part of the daily activities of modern man. For example, the time, and therefore money, saved by any business, irrespective of type or size, by using an effective telephone system is simply incalculable. From the housewife on a lonely farm in the Australian Outback to the greatest government, from workers and students to tycoons, all of us would get a great deal less done if not for the simple telephone. Second, except for the wheel, the telephone, more than any other invention ever in history, has served as a catalyst for the development of an array of devices. For instance, the greatest phenomenon of all times, the internet, came about as a result of service providers using telephones to connect with each other. In addition, new technology will soon result in videophones becoming a common piece of equipment in modern society. Lastly, the mobile phone, to name but one, has led to the birth of a number of complete industries, generating unprecedented wealth and in the process providing a livelihood for millions. (182 words) CONCLUSION Because those tiny instruments are now taken for granted, we seldom realize the significance of what Mr. Bell did. To conclude, the telephone is undoubtedly the most significant invention before the computer. (32 words) (Total words: 253) Download 1.43 Mb. Do'stlaringiz bilan baham: 
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