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Essay Practice 
In some countries, teenagers have jobs while they are still students. Do you think this is 
a good idea? Support your opinion by using specific reasons and details. 

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5- As the first step to combat obesity among students, Health authorities 
intend to remove all the unhealthy foods from school canteens and 
introduce new kinds. 
To what extent do you agree with this scheme?
Nowadays the number of students suffering from obesity and obesity-related 
diseases is increasing at an astonishing rate and I think it is a good idea to 
promote healthy living and eating habits among students today, but in my 
opinion removing the food most children love from school canteens is not going 
to work.
Would children want to buy something they have never heard of? Most of the 
items that may be introduced are strange to students. If the government forces 
schools to provide this kind of food, most children will definitely not buy them. It 
is not the government’s business what students eat. Education is the best way 
to promote healthy living, not prohibition. Therefore, instead of starting with 
schools and banning the school canteens from selling the unhealthy foods, 
authorities must inform the students of the harmful effects of such foods.
Furthermore, the ill-conceived plan could wipe out a great deal of money a year 
from school revenues and force schools to close canteens. Therefore, school 
communities and parents should as well choose what is best for their students. 
Hence, abandoning the foods most children are fond of is not an alternative.
However I do believe that canteens should gradually try to provide foods suited 
to students’ ethnic and religious backgrounds and try to improve their health and
reduce alarming rates of obesity among the students.
In conclusion, serving nutritious food might improve children’s health and reduce 
obesity. But the move to ban such foods from canteens will have a negative 
feedback.
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