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general trends and
some superlatives .
You need to have a general idea of trends and comparisons in your main
points.
4. The next thing you should be doing here is you need to organize your paragraphs I’ll tell you to do 3 paragraphs here: your
introduction , your
overview , and
2 body paragraphs .
Your introduction
should be
a paraphrased summary.
Your overview
should be
the main points
that have
trends
and some
comparisons
.
You can use
some expressions for your overview
as below:
-
The graph shows (information about) /indicates /illustrates /highlight (the data about)… -
As the graph shows -
It is clear from the graph (that) -
As is shown by the graph -
It can be seen from the graph (that) -
As can be clearly seen from the graph, -
From the graph, it is clear (that) -
As is illustrated by the graph, You will get marks on your main points. If you don’t include any main points
in your overview paragraph even though your grammar and vocabulary are
perfect, you are not going to get higher than a 5.0 in task achievement
because there is no clear overview. If you want to get a
7.0+ in task
achievement,
you need to
add the main points
that
have trends
and
some
comparisons
.
Your body paragraphs need to be organized logically
. For example, if we
have 5 countries to look at. We may organize the body paragraphs by their
figures (3 countries have the highest figures, we will describe them in one
paragraph, and with the smallest figures, we will describe them in the other
paragraph)
