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Vary Your Sentence Structure
The repetition of sentence patterns is not only boring, but in some cases, it can reduce your grade. The SAT essay,
for example, is scored by readers trained to look for, and reward, variety in sentence structure. They can deduct
a point or two for an essay filled with sentences that follow the same pattern. When you’re editing your essay, check
for monotonous sentence structure. Here’s an example:
The plasma membrane is the outermost part of the cell. It isolates the cytoplasm. It regulates what comes in and out
of the cytoplasm. It also allows interaction with other cells. The cytoplasm is the second layer of the cell. It contains water,
salt, enzymes, and proteins. It also contains organelles like mitochondria.
Notice how each sentence begins with a noun or pronoun, followed by a verb. The rhythm created by this
repetition is boring. A successful edit should vary the sentences:
The plasma membrane, the outermost part of the cell, isolates the cytoplasm. It regulates what comes in and out of the
cell and allows interaction with other cells. The second layer, the cytoplasm, contains water, salt, enzymes, and pro-
teins, as well as organelles like mitochondria.
The edited version combines sentences and uses introductory phrases and appositives (descriptive words
and phrases set off by commas) to vary sentence structure. The result is a much more engaging paragraph.