Mistborn: secret history

Dox would have had a fit of laughter seeing this, Kelsier thought. Well, Kelsier was far too arrogant to

worry about his pride.

“So,” he whispered to Alonoe in her own language, “you presume to hold Preservation’s power. You think

you’ll fare better than he did at resisting me?”

He then pulled himself down under the ground. It was black as night under there, but he could hear the

thumping of feet and the cries of shock from what he’d said. He swam out a distance, then lifted an ear

from the ground.

“It was Ruin!” Alonoe was saying. “I swear, it must have been his Vessel. Speaking to me.”

“So he does know,” said another of the ancient ones. Kelsier thought it was Elrao, the man who had

challenged her back in the fortress.

“Your wards were supposed to prevent this!” Alonoe said. “You told me they’d stop him from sensing the

device!”

“There are ways for him to know of us without having sensed the orb, Alonoe,” another female said. “My

art is exacting.”

“How he found us is not the problem,” Elrao said. “The question is why he hasn’t destroyed us.”

“Preservation’s Vessel still lives,” the other woman said, musing. “That might be preventing Ruin’s direct

interference.”

“I don’t like it,” Elrao said. “I think we should turn back.”

“We have committed,” Alonoe replied. “We press forward. No quarreling.”

The stir in the camp eventually quieted down and the ancient ones turned back to their bedrolls, though

more of the guards stayed awake than usual. Kelsier smiled, then pushed himself over beside Alonoe’s

head again.

“How would you like to die, Alonoe?” he whispered to her, then ducked beneath the earth.

This time they didn’t go back to sleep. The next day it was a bleary-eyed party that set off across the dark

landscape. That night, Kelsier prodded them again. And again. He made the next week a hell for the

group, whispering to different members, promising them terrible things. He was quite proud of the

various ways he came up with to distract, frighten, and unnerve them. He didn’t get a chance to grab

Alonoe’s satchel – if anything, they were more careful with it than they had been. He did manage to

snatch one of the other ones while they were breaking down camp one morning. It was empty save for a

fake glass orb.

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Kelsier continued his campaign of discord, and by the time the group reached the jungle of strange trees

their patience had unraveled. They snapped at one another and spent less time each morning or night

resting. Half the party was convinced they should turn back, though Alonoe insisted that the fact that

“Ruin” only spoke to them was proof he couldn’t stop them. She pressed the increasingly divided group

forward, into the trees.

Which was exactly where Kelsier wanted them. Staying ahead of the horses would be easy in this snarl of

a jungle, where he could pass through foliage as if it weren’t there. He slipped on ahead and set up a little

surprise for the group, then came back to find them bickering again. Perfect.

He pushed himself into the center of one of the trees, keeping only his hand outside, tucked at the back,

holding the knife that Nazh had given him. As the line of horses passed, he reached out and swiped one of

the animals on the flank.

The creature let out a scream of pain, and chaos broke out in the line. The people near the front – their

nerves taut from a week spent being tormented by Kelsier’s whispers – gave their horses their heads.

Soldiers shouted, warning they were under attack. Ancient ones urged their beasts in different directions,

some collapsing as the animals tripped in the underbrush.

Kelsier darted through the jungle, catching up to those in the front. Alonoe had kept her horse mostly

under control, but it was even darker in these trees than outside, and the lanterns jostled wildly as the

animals moved. Kelsier dashed past Alonoe to a point ahead where he’d strung his cloak between two

trees and lashed it in place with vines.

He climbed a tree and reached into the cloak as the front of the line – haggard and reduced in numbers –

arrived. He’d lashed his fire inside the cloak, and he brought it alive as they neared. The result was a

burning, cloaked figure, appearing suddenly in the air above the already frazzled group.

They screamed, calling that Ruin had found them, and split apart, running their horses in a chaotic

jumble – some one direction, some another.

Kelsier dropped to the ground and slipped through the darkness, staying parallel to Alonoe and the guard

who managed to remain with her. The woman soon caught her horse in a snarl of undergrowth. Perfect.

Kelsier ducked away and recovered his stash of supplies, then threw on one of the robes he’d found in the

fortress. He scrambled through the brush, the robe catching on things, until he was just close enough for

Alonoe to see.

Then he stepped out where she could see him and called to her, waving his hand. Thinking she’d found a

larger group of her people, she and her lone guard trotted their horses toward him. That, however, only

served to draw them away from the rest of the group. Kelsier led her farther from the others, then ducked

away into the darkness, losing her and leaving her and her guard isolated.

From there he scrambled through the dark underbrush toward the rest of the group, his phantom heart

pounding.