Nowadays, people prefer to shop in supermarkets rather than local stores. What are the reasons behind it? Is it a negative or positive development?

Embedded questions (in questions, in statements)
STEP 8
While… , in my opinion… (because…)
Whereas… , I am of the view that…(as…)
Although… , I feel that …(since…)

OPINION ESSAYS

STEP 1

It is sometimes argued that…
Some people argue that…
It is believed that…


It is more important for schoolchildren to learn about local history than world history.
To what extent to you agree or disagree?
STEP 2


It is more important for schoolchildren to learn about local history than world history.
To what extent to you agree or disagree?

1. 
   I (partially) totally agree with this notion and will present my arguments in this essay.
   

– I believe that local history plays a more important role than world history.

2. 
   I completely disagree with this idea and will present my arguments in this essay.
   

– I believe that world history is more crucial than local history. – I believe that both local and world history are important equally for schoolchildren.

3. 
   Although local history may have some benefits for students, I feel that they would benefit more from learning about the history of the world.
   

BODY 1


On the one hand, to some extent, history of locality can have its useful points. To begin with,…
Admittedly, learning about local history may offer some benefits. The main one is that…


It would be a mistake to think that local history does not have a role. In some ways it does. Firstly,
In conclusion, it should be admitted that safety has become a significant issue for many people. There are several reasons for this trend such as increased crime rate and gun ownership, and I feel that measures including stricter laws and stringent punishments may help to deal with this situation.