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finishing at correct time. The very example is when we appear for exams, it should be 
planned well before rather than sitting at the end moment and at last leaving it unfinished. 
Careful planning allows the learner to know his weakness and strength in a particular 
work. This would enable him to work well on areas of weakness and thus would help him 
to improve his final performance. This kind is seen among many sports people who 
practice well before the final match, to improve where they seem to lack. It gives them 
more confidence to finally approach the test with the positive attitude. 
Last but not least careful planning further grooms the personality of an individual, as 
planning ahead gives him the sense of responsibility and creativity to organize his work 
and finally the competitiveness to reach the goal. 
Thus overall careful planning makes a person more organized, responsible, competitive, 
and puctual. All these qualities finally help him to achieve his purpose. 
 
54) What change would make your hometown more appealing to people your age? Use 
specific reasons and examples to support your opinion. 
 
55) Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The most important aspect 
of a job is the money a person earns. Use specific reasons and examples to support your 
answer. 
 
(a) Some people may think that money is the most important aspect of a job. Of course, 
this factor cannot be ignored. But in my opinion, I disapprove this kind of idea. As I see it, 
there are many other important aspects a job, rather than money. 
One of them is the satisfaction of the worker. No matter what other people say, if the 
person is satisfied with his/her work, that's it. For example, my father was a good student 
in high school. His parents and teachers told him to go to law school because it was the 
best career a person could have at that time and was an honor for the family. But my father 
disagreed and went to the army because he wanted to. And until now, he is very satisfied 
with his job. He didn't choose a job that was conspicuous to other people, but a job he 
liked. 
Another factor is how well the job suits the person. We can't get a clumsy person to be a 
doctor that requires great awareness on the work, such as surgery. A single mistake, even 
the slightest failure can kill a person. So people should also consider on how well he/she 
can do the job, and if it's suiting the person. 
In closing, I disagree with the idea of money being the most important aspect of a job. Of 
course, we can't totally ignore money. Usually many people just work, whether they like it