The graph below compares the number of visits to two new music sites on the web

Task I

The graph below compares the number of visits to two new music sites on the web. Overall, it seems that “Pop parade” is the most visited with influential falls and rises, while “Music choice” got fluent results of visits in most cases.

Firstly, we notice that “Pop parade” started with a great deal, which means a number of 120 visits. Therefore, it fell fluently over the 9 days, with 40 visitors. For the next week, there is a sharp rise of results with some fallings in the middle.

Regarding “Music choice”, merely in the beginning of the road, we could emphasize the sparkling visits equal to 60 in the third day. In the following days, we can notice regretful fluent visitors over 20 per day. The situation is getting better over the last days with high results and that site is fitting to the customers with average of 60 visits in the end.

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Task II

Some people believe that computers are more a hindrance than a help in today’s world. Others feel that they are such indispensable tools that they would not be able to live or work. There are valid arguments on both sides, which I will discuss now and share my own thought.

On the one hand, nobody can deny that computers bring vast options in today’s era. Even now, we live in a PostBC era of modern technologies. Now you can immerse into the virtual world of your dreams. Moreover, this is real. You can now solve problems of rendering or editing your videos much faster because of improvements. Furthermore, many designers, architects and doctors could make their tests and prototypes just with computers. Designers paint their clothes via pens on a computer. Architects can build up prototype of buildings via Lid AR or TOUGH sensors. Pharmaceuticals can take of a test of medicaments in a computer program. That is all computer engineering. In addition, it is a new way to relax by playing games or watching movies.

On the other hand, it must be said that computers are killing people. There is a wide range of health problems because of computers. The first and main is eyes, than backache, radiation and sedentary lifestyle. For instance, many do not notice that they are just have a health problem because of much time sitting at computer. In addition, when they take medical review they realize the problem. Often, it is late to take a treatment and even money could not help them. Furthermore, playing today’s computer games making our new generation violent. The games mainly connected with killing people, which in itself a problem of game industries. Cybercrime is the most worry of today. With a computer that has the Internet connection, your safety is not guaranteed.

To conclude, I tend to agree that computers bring many advantages. Although, it has its own drawbacks, which I think will be solved by giant industries like HP, Acer, Apple, Samsung and others.

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