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What are some factors in modern society that cause stress?

In the history of humanity, people have tried to control their stress and they could succeed. They could because most of the time they used to be together. They used to be in the nature. Most of the time; they did not used to be in trouble with psychological problems. For now, our focus is “some factors in modern society that cause stress”. I think there are two important reasons in the modern society:; we are getting far away from each other and other reason is most people have perfectionist thoughts. Let’s explain these!

I have talked towith my parents and old relatives about this issue. They told me that they were not much stressful when they were younger because they used to be together. Of course, they had plenty of problems but being together is the key of solution. In fact, when we get together,; we forget stressful and empty things. Because we smile and make some humour, discuss something which we are curious about it and so on. In short, these sort of activitiesthese sorts of activities reduce our high-level stress and make us feel pretty good and also improve our brain. We cannot manage our stress depending on getting far away each other.

Perfectionist thoughts make us feel more stressful. For instance, I search for something on my social media account and suddenly decide to enter my friend’s profile then see that there are a great deal of photos which are about amazing events, great wealth and so on. I start feeling upset depending on this. Of course, stress gets increase because I can ask myself a question; why do not I have these? There are a lot of perfectionist thoughts like this.

In short, there a are great deal of causes of stress but, I think two of them are the most effective two reasons. I strongly believe that, if we want to reduce high-level stress we should come up with ideas which are about two reasons.