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In contrast to the figures for the other countries, the number of prisoners in Great
Britain rose steadily between 1930 and 1980, reaching a peak of about 80,000 at the
end of the period. (34 words)
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and grouped sentences together,
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Sample Answer
The information given in the chart makes comparisons in the number of prisoners in
five different countries from 1930 to 1980.
While the figures for imprisonment fluctuated over the period shown, it is clear that
the United States had the highest number of prisoners overall. Great Britain, on the
other hand, had the lowest number of prisoners for the majority of the period.
As can be seen from the graph, the United States had the highest number of prisoners
in four out of the six
years shown on the chart, and in 1980 the figure for this country
peaked at nearly 140,000 prisoners. Canada had the highest figures for imprisonment
in 1930 and 1950, with about 120,000 prisoners in both years.
The figures for New Zealand and Australia fluctuated between 40,000 and 100,000
prisoners, although New Zealand's prison population tended to be the higher of the
two.
In contrast to the figures
for the other countries, the number
of prisoners in Great
Britain rose steadily between 1930 and 1980, reaching a peak of about 80,000 at the
end of the period.
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