Sample answers for Writing tasks
TE ST 5, W RI T I N G T A SK 1
S A M P L E A N S W E R
This is an answer written by a candidate who achieved a Band 5.0 score. Here is the
exam iner’s comment:
The candidate covers the key features and rounds off the
description with an
overview. Organisation is evident, however not wholly logical, and it is sometimes
difficult to relate data to specific age groups. Vocabulary is
just about adequate,
but is rather dependent on input material
[regular physical activity
|
percentage
]:
original material is limited to e.g.
[teenager
|
mid-twenties]
with a lot of inaccuracy
in word formation. Most sentence forms consist of simple structures and these
are
often inaccurate
[bars’s changed and interesting
|
men’s percentage are
increasing
|
the percentage more decrease until],
though there is some accuracy in
comparative forms
[is higher than].
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