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The pictures illustrate the ingredients that go into a
factory-made fish pie, and the various steps in its
production.
The
pie contains salmon, peas, sauce and potatoes, and there are ten stages
in its manufacture, from
delivery to dispatch. One of the ingredients, potato, goes through its own
six-stage preparation
process before it can be added to the pie.
Potatoes are the first ingredient to be prepared on the production line. They are delivered to the
factory up to a month
before the process begins, and they must be cleaned, peeled and sliced. Potato
peelings are thrown away, and
the sliced potatoes are boiled, then chilled and stored.
When fresh salmon arrives at the factory,
lemon juice and salt are added, and the fish is cooked in a
steam oven within 12 hours of delivery. Next, factory workers remove and dispose
of the skin and
bones, and the fish is inspected. Following inspection,
pre-prepared peas, sauce and potatoes are
added. The resulting fish
pies are wrapped, frozen and then stored or dispatched.
(175 words, band 9)
Task: I forgot to mention that the fish pie is in a microwaveable container. Where could you add this
information in my answer?
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