Day 2 (Mar 1) Writing Answers


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Day 2 (Mar 1) - Writing Answers

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Day 2 ONLINE WRITING CHALLENGE
IMPROVED VERSION:
Economic progress is often used as the primary indicator of a country's success,
but there are several other factors that should be taken into consideration as well.
While factors such as education, healthcare, safety, and freedom of expression are
all important in measuring a country's success, it's difficult to argue that one factor is
more important than the others.
One key factor that contributes to a country's overall progress is its social
development. Access to high-quality education and healthcare is essential for
improving standards of living, especially for those living in remote or rural areas.
Social equity is an important factor to consider when measuring a country's
progress, and it should be a priority for policymakers.
Another crucial factor is safety. People should be able to feel safe in their daily
lives, without having to worry about becoming a victim of crime. Crime rates can
significantly impact a country's overall success, and effective safety measures are
critical for a country to thrive. For instance, Dubai has become a popular tourist
destination due to its safety measures and low crime rates.
Freedom of expression is also essential in measuring a country's success. People
should be able to express their opinions freely without facing any consequences.
It's important to have a society where people can speak their minds and engage in
open dialogue, without the fear of being persecuted for their views.
While these factors are all important, they are also interconnected. For example,
without high-quality education, crime rates are likely to increase, and safety
measures will be less effective. Additionally, a society that restricts freedom of

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