Day 2 (Mar 1) Writing Answers
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Day 2 (Mar 1) - Writing Answers
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- Day 2 ONLINE WRITING CHALLENGE VERSION 1
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PLAN I. Introduction A. Definition of economic progress B. The importance of considering other factors besides economic progress C. The difficulty in determining the most important factor II. Social Development as a Key Factor A. Importance of education and healthcare B. Significance of social equity C. The role of policymakers III. Safety as a Crucial Factor A. The impact of crime rates on a country's success B. The role of safety measures in thriving countries C. Examples of safe countries like Dubai IV. Freedom of Expression as an Essential Factor A. The importance of expressing opinions freely B. The dangers of limiting freedom of expression C. The potential for innovation and growth V. Interconnectedness of Factors A. The relationship between high-quality education and safety B. The impact of limited freedom of expression on social progress C. The need for policymakers to prioritize all factors VI. Conclusion A. Recap of the importance of considering other factors besides economic progress B. The equal importance of education, healthcare, safety, and freedom of expression C. The need for policymakers to prioritize all factors to ensure a high quality of life for citizens. Day 2 ONLINE WRITING CHALLENGE VERSION 1 Economic progress is a more conventional way of determining a country’s success, and there are many other factors such as education, medicine and level of crime that need to be taken into account. In my opinion, all of these factors are equally important to a country’s progress, and therefore we cannot point to just one. In addition to economic development, any country’s success nowadays is measured via its social development as well. This includes, but not limited to, the quality of education and medicine. In other words, in order to have higher standards of living, people should have access to top-notch schools and state of the art medical facilities across the country, not just in urban areas. This social equity is an important factor when measuring the country’s overall progress. Equally important are people’s safety and their freedom to express themselves without facing any consequences. When safety is concerned, a primary indicator is the level of crime existing in the country. Therefore, for a country to be considered a desirable place to live, those living there should not have any irrational fear of crime. When I visited the UAE as a tourist, I was quite impressed with safety measures and almost non-existing levels of crime in the street. It is no wonder that Dubai has become a favourite destination for many people whether for a permanent or a short-term stay. Another key factor is the right to self-expression without the fear of facing any consequences. People should be able to express their opinions freely without having to ‘pay for it’. In other words, even in countries like France, some people can still fall victim to hate crime for expressing their feelings about certain issues. In my opinion, we cannot pick any one factor ahead of others. All of the factors discussed in this essay are equally important in any country’s success. In fact, these factors are interconnected to each other in the most intricate ways that the absence of one is likely to affect others. For instance, without high levels of education, crime rates are likely to increase. Likewise, when crime rates are high, people are less likely to feel safe about freedom of expression. In conclusion, apart from economic development, different aspects of social development including education, health care, safety and a freedom to self-expression are as important in any country’s success. Of all these factors, we cannot name any one being more important than others as they are intertwined in a very complex relationship. The downfall of any one factor might lead to a collapse of the whole social construction that determines the success level of a country. Download 0.62 Mb. Do'stlaringiz bilan baham: |
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