Exercise: Read the essay questions below. Which one asks you to write an opinion essay and which one is for problem-solution essay? The underlined words may help you to reach your decision


Developing the body paragraph #2(providing solutions)


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Problems I face when writing an essay

Developing the body paragraph #2(providing solutions)
Problems about people’s health
Problems in public services
Despite these problems, there are some solutions to overcome the
negative effects of overpopulation.(TOPIC SENTENCE)
First solution is that
the
government should take actions about reducing the air pollution. They can do
this by motivating people not to use their cars and by investing on the public
transportation systems more.
Besides
, the factories should be punished if their
emissions exceed the limits.
Another solution is that
the government should
provide free health care for those who have respiratory diseases and give free
psychological counselling for all the citizens.
In this way,
people can cope with
the stress of living in an overpopulated city.
Last solution is that
the local
authorities should motivate people not to waste food.
For example,
they can
organize campaigns and seminars about recycling.
✓ reducing air pollution by 
upgrading energy use and 
alternative transport systems
✓ providing free health care for 
the citizens
✓ providing free psychological
counselling for the citizens
✓ More investment on public 
transportation
✓ More trains, longer metro lines
less cars in traffic
✓ Motivating people not to waste 
food and to recycle


5. Writing Conclusion
In conclusion paragraph, you should return to the thesis 
statement, restate it and express your final thoughts and 
recommendations.
Here are two strategies:
1. Add a final observation about how people view the problem.
2. Make a ‘call for action’ that asks people to do something to help 
solve the problem.


Exercise: 
Re-state the thesis statements below, add an observation and a call 
for action.

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