Using linking language – try this!
It’s also important that you link your sentences together. One of the most effective ways to do this is use “this”. It is a very natural linking word and can help you avoid repetition. See how it introduces these sentences:
Perhaps the most significant of these is that not only has marriage become less popular,
This naturally leads to fewer people
This can have the effect of
This phenomenon is likely to be harmful
This is particularly the case
IELTS healthcare for children essay
This is one of my model essay resource lessons where you can
get notes on how to approach the essay
read a model essay
practise using the essay vocabulary
Quick notes on the essay structure
It is important that you discuss both points of view in your essay even if you decide one point of view is better than the other. The logical approach is to use one main paragraph for
why the government might take responsibility
why parents might take responsibility
It is also important that you give your own personal opinion as the question asks you to do this. I suggest you do this
in the introduction so that the examiner knows what your point of view is throughout the essay
in the conclusion which should mirror your introduction
I also suggest that you use personal opinion phrases to make it clear that this is what you think. Do not feel that you can only use impersonal language.
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