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For our essay, we will agree that although external factors influence the development of a child,
parents and family still have the upper hand.
Our reason: A child's choice of friends, books or music depends on the values instilled in them by
their parents.
Band 9 answer structure for discuss both views + give opinion essay
Though there are many ways to structure your IELTS essay, we’ll use this time-tested band 9
essay structure:
1.
Introduction
2.
Body paragraph 1 – discuss the first opinion
3.
Body paragraph 2 – discuss the second opinion
4.
Body paragraph 3 – give your own opinion
5.
Conclusion
Tip: Use linking structures, vocabulary to write essays and some words from academic wordlist.
Introduction
Paraphrase the statement (sentences 1 and 2) and give your own opinion (sentence 3):
It is often held that teachers, peers and the media have a significant influence on the life of children. While
some people argue that these factors are predominant in shaping a child's future, others believe that parents
impact their offspring in more critical ways. This essay will discuss both these points of view and argue in
favour of the latter.
Body paragraph 1
For this essay, it is good to write three body paragraphs. In the first paragraph,
you can dissect the
first argument.
On the one hand, the books children read and the music they listen to form their belief system. In other
words, children tend to copy the behaviour of their favourite personality or fictional character. Moreover,
when little ones work and play in groups, they are influenced by their peers. Finally, other factors, like the
media, prompt children to want things regarded as fashionable. For instance, children demand toys that they
see on television.
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