the following year.
·
CD sales
increased steadily
from 2005 until 2010,
before
falling
slightly
in the following year.
·
After
increasing steadily
from 2005 until 2010,
CD sales
fell slightly
in
the following year.
5. Vocabulary variations
Again, these variations increase
the range of language you use, which can
make your writing more interesting
and
benefit your band score
.
·
There was
a slight fall in
CD sales
in 2010
.
·
(The year) 2010
saw
a slight fall
in
CD sales
.
·
CD sales
experienced
a slight fall
in 2010
.
6. Giving evidence (data)
When you
describe the key information
in a diagram, it's extremely important
to include evidence to support your idea
. This means you
add data
:
specific
numbers, percentages, etc
.
For example:
·
CD
sales increased slightly
from 52
(million)
to 70
million units
between 2009 and 2010.
·
CD sales increased slightly
from 52
million units in 2010
to 70
million
the following year.
·
CD sales increased
by eight
million units from 2009 to 2010.
·
During the period from 1990 to 1995, there was a decrease in gas prices
from
$2.70 to
$2.75
per gallon.
·
There was an increase in the sugar export
between May and August
from about 10% to over 20%.
·
Between 1990 and 1995, the price of gas decreased
from $2.75 to $2.70
per gallon.
·
The sugar export increased
from approximately 10% to more than 20%
between May and August.
·
From 1990 to 1995, the price of gas experienced a decrease
from $2.75
to $2.70
per gallon.
·
The sugar export witnessed an increase between May and August
from
around 10% to over 20%
.
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