In recent times, many young people have become less social and stay inside more often. What are the causes of this? How can young people be enabled or encouraged to interact with the outside world more?

where/who/when/how

Opinions differ regarding who should be responsible in raising children.

STEP 2
While… (to some extent), in my opinion, on the whole, …
Whereas… , I am of the view that… mainly/primarily
Although… , I feel that, for the most part, …

While some people advocate the use of animals in medical experimentations, in my opinion, on the whole, this is an unethical practice.
Although some suggest focusing on senior citizens, I feel that the government’s main focus should be placed on younger generation in terms of investments.

STEP 1+2
It is believed that increasing the number of existing roads and making them wider will decrease traffic jams. However, in my opinion, overall, it is better to construct train lines and underground to solve this problem effectively.

It is sometimes said that it is vital to experiment new drugs using animals. Nevertheless, personally I believe that this practice is totally unfair.

Some think that testing new medicines on animals is necessary while others believe it is not right. Discuss both views and give your opinion


STEP 3+4

THIRD-PERSON STYLE
On the one hand, there are some people who believe that …
The primary reason why they think so is that …
SUPPORT
They also argue that... / Proponents of ….(topic) also argue that
SUPPORT



THIRD-PERSON STYLE
On the one hand, there are some people who believe that there is no use in learning the history. The primary reason why they think so is that events that happened in the past may be different to today’s life. For example, before people were mainly involved in agriculture, but today our life is full of technological advances such as computer, phones and the internet. The knowledge about the past may not be applicable or relevant in today’s highly technological world. Proponents of not learning the history also argue that there are more important issues than studying the past. In other words, today people should focus on more significant things such as developing IT, improving healthcare and nanotechnology. These will help humans to improve the quality of their lives and increase the chances of survival.
REASON STYLE
On the other hand, despite ….., I believe that there are some reasons to argue that...
The principal one is that …
SUPPORT
An additional reason can be the fact that …
SUPPORT

REASON STYLE
On the other hand, despite the mentioned arguments, I believe that there are some reasons to argue that history has a lot of value for people. The principal one is that …
SUPPORT
An additional reason can be the fact that …
SUPPORT