Analysis
―I guess I could begin by saying something about who this person is, and I think I
would have to choose the superstar Jackie Chan from Hong Kong.‖
(The first point is quite simple, but for most Part Two topics the first point is usually just
a simple factual introduction.)
Fluency: the sentence begins with a liking phrase and contains redundant
language.
Vocabulary: one topic-related word- ―superstar‖/
Grammar: complex structure and use of complex tense - ―I would have to
choose…‖/
―Going on to my next point which is why he is famous, I really need to add that he
is a would-renowned martial arts film star as well as being a successful director. In fact
he was probably the first Chinese actor to achieve blockbuster success in Hollywood.‖
Fluency: the sentence begins with a linking structure and contains 3 more
connecting structures: ―I really need to add that‖, ―in fact‖, ―as well as‖.
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