P r a c t i c e 2
Revise and improve the following weak thesis statements.
1. In this essay, I will explain why I want to attend Briarwood College.
2. The death penalty is a controversial issue.
3. This novel had an important impact on my life.
4. What would the consequences of censorship on the Internet be?
I n S h o r t
Drafts are rough versions of your essay—a chance to get ideas on paper so you can
shape them into an effective
essay. To get started, draft a thesis statement that makes a strong assertion about your subject. Be sure it’s focused
and avoid
simply making an announcement, asking a question or stating a fact.
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