P r a c t i c e 2
On a separate sheet of paper or on your computer, revise one of the example paragraphs in the lying with silence
essay to provide more information and specific details. Expand the example until you have two complete
paragraphs.
I n S h o r t
Revision deals with the content and style of the essay and should begin by addressing the big-picture issues: the-
sis and support. Look at your essay with fresh eyes, both literally in the form of trusted readers, and figuratively,
as you reread after taking a break from your writing. Then, rework the essay to assure that it fulfills the assign-
ment, contains a strong, clear thesis statement, and is supported with convincing examples and evidence.
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