Minutes a day n e w y o r k

L e s s o n   8
Practice 1
Here’s a possible response:
I never spend much time planning an essay. A lot of times I procrastinate and wait until the day before the paper
is due to get started—especially if I don’t like the assignment. Then I’ll just sit down and write a draft. Some-
times I get stuck for a long time on the introduction. I have to have my introduction done before I write the body
of an essay. Sometimes I get stuck too because I have trouble organizing my ideas. I usually don’t outline unless
my teacher says I have to. I should start doing outlines (at least rough ones) and start working on my essays
earlier. I also need to make sure I am clearer about my audience and purpose. I think I’d write better (and be more
relaxed) if I did some brainstorming as soon as I got the assignment, then drafted a thesis and outline, and then
wrote a draft.
Practice 2
Here are some successful responses:
1. Briarwood offers everything I’m looking for in a college: a renowned child psychology department; a small,
beautiful campus not too far from home; and opportunities to develop my leadership skills through
extracurricular programs.
2. The use of DNA evidence in the appeals of death penalty convictions has changed the nature of the con-
troversy surrounding this important issue.
3. My fascination with American history began when I read The Grapes of Wrath.
4. The Internet must remain a completely uncensored environment.