Nowadays, people prefer to shop in supermarkets rather than local stores. What are the reasons behind it? Is it a negative or positive development?

EXAMPLE
In effect, this can affect the income of people and the whole community.
RESULT
Moreover, it can affect individuals as well because they would tend to spend more if they patronize supermarkets too much.
ARGUMENT+REASON
The retail prices in these establishments are usually higher because of the overheads, such as utilities, taxes, security, and rent, which, in turn, can lead people to spend beyond their budgets when they regularly shop in these places.
EXAMPLE+RESULT

In conclusion, there are many reasons behind the increasing popularity of supermarkets over local stores in many countries worldwide. Nonetheless, this can be seen as a negative development for both individuals and the entire community.

ADVANTAGE DISADVANTAGE
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STEP 2
There are some advantages of this phenomenon, but I am of the view that the disadvantages are more significant.
Although there are some benefits of this, I believe that the drawbacks are more significant.
While this phenomenon has certain benefits, I believe that the drawbacks far outweigh them.
Despite having certain benefits, overall, I believe that this trend has more drawbacks.

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