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DISCUSSION ESSAY (NO OPINION)
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- Main body 1: 1 st side Main body 2: 2 nd side Conclusion
- SAMPLE Some people think that children should be taught to be competitive in school. Others, however, say that cooperation and team working skills are more
important. Discuss both sides.
--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- #ESSAY STRUCTURE INTRODUCTION: introduce the topic by paraphrasing technique People have different views about – People’s views differ with regard to … (people have different perspectives on…) While some claim/think that … (the other side) , others believe/consider Main body 1: 1 st side Main body 2: 2 nd side Conclusion: Summarize the key points JOHNNY | IELTS 8.0 pg. 6 #SAMPLE Some people think that children should be taught to be competitive in school. Others, however, say that cooperation and team working skills are more important. Discuss both sides. Plan: Intro: compete/cooperate 1 ST side: competition helps students do better at school – motivates – better academic performance – example – better future in the job market 2 nd side: schools should emphasize on cooperation – learning how to work alongside each other – communication skills – negotiate with others Conclusion: competitive/working together. JOHNNY | IELTS 8.0 pg. 7 #SAMPLE People have different perspectives on whether schools ought to focus on teaching children to compete or work together as a team. While some people think that competition is more important, others consider that it is better for children to learn to cooperate with each other. Children who learn to compete against each other often do better in school, according to some. In other words, the competition between students motivates them to excel in their studies or tasks which consequently produces better academic performance and results. For example, students generally apply themselves and work harder when they are in direct competition with their classmates. Furthermore, it is commonly believed that being driven to achieve the best is vital in order to succeed later in life when, as adults, they must compete against others in the job market. On the other hand, it is often thought that it is better if the emphasis at school is on cooperating with others in a team. People do not live, work or socialize apart from others, so learning how to work alongside others ought to be taught from childhood. Without these skills, children would lack the ability to communicate with each other or know how to deal with confrontations and conflicts in a constructive way. Another reason why team skills are useful for children is that they can learn how to negotiate with others to complete a task which are useful skills to have for their future. In conclusion, many people think that children need to become more competitive, whereas others think that it is best for a child to focus on working together. Download 196.71 Kb. Do'stlaringiz bilan baham: |
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