Sample Essays For toefl

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Many people believe that one can be successful if he /she is committed, honest, faithful or 
intelligence. But, the foundation of each of these qualities lies in believing the power the 
person has, and working accordingly to achieve the goal. There are many people, who are 
honest, beautiful, good and soft spoken, intelligent and even faithful, but only some are 
successful in achieving their goal. While all of these characteristics are equally important 
and act as the medium for success, the most important is the power to cope with 
circumstances and keep our spirit goes on in the most difficult situations. 
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As it is well said that we cannot direct the wind but we can adjust the sail, similarly, in the 
way to our destination, we will come across lot of obstacles, but we need to find the way to 
come across that situation. This is where the success lies. No matter how low we fall, but 
what matters is how high we bounce back Success can be measured by what we have and 
how much of the power we are using to achieve our goal. For, example while in playing 
games, it is sure that one team will win and other will lose, but the spirit is not just in 
winning but also in learning new techniques and improving the team sprit and cooperation. 
Winner team cannot always be successful, but the successful team is the one, which has 
improved a lot with respect to its earlier performance.

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Though the person is honest, intelligent, faithful and committed, it is not sure that he will 
be successful. The most important rather than these are to know the environment and the 
need, and implementing best of the best ideas and actions. No matter how smaller step it 
can be, but it can bring great changes. As Shiva Khera has said, “Winners don’t do 
different things but they do things differently”, better explains the meaning of being 
successful. Success is not just winning, but also more than that is how much we are 
satisfied with whatever we are doing. So, all qualities like honesty, intelligence, and 
faithfulness are directly proportional to the success.
The definition of success for each of us may vary. Some may think root cause for success 
is honesty while others may think it is the commitment. But, in my opinion, where there is 
will there is power, so each of us should know our strength, and work accordingly to be 
successful. And we should measure our success not with others but with what we have and 
what we have achieved.