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Global warming
A generation ago, overheating climate was not observed in some continents. However, in many parts of the world there has been sharp growth of the problem. This essay will discuss some of the main issues associated with it. Good job
One of the main causes of the problem is that use of fossil fuels are significantly rise(rising). It can change weather obviously because it gives negative effect to atmosphere. (Sth seems strange here) All of the transports and various factors produce carbon dioxide in(as a result) result effecting climate badly. To solve this problem, numbers of transports and factors must be decreased by goverment. (leave a space or line here) Another issue is that present of deforestations are growth(what are you saying???), That is to say, forests are lost in some states in order to construct many skyscrapers. Decline in rates (numbers) of trees can not help regulate climate. To tackle this issue, forests must not be destroyed for any constructions in any urbans. Finally, another problem is the increases of waste today. Solid wastes and hazardous waste impact weather change. When solid waste are decomposed, carbon dioxide and methane gas is created. As a result there is no air present(strange???). The way forward could be to put solid waste into waste box and to recycle them.
To sum up, changing air has become essential issue in our planet due to reasons such as the increase in presents of fossil fuels, deforestations, waste. This is a serious problem and unless we can prevent rise of them, the atmosphere will suffer. My view is that main responsibility for solving this problem lies with humans and goverment.
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It looks essay is underlength, and Coherence is very low. It is not easy to understand your essay and what you mean. I hope no translator is used. I could not understand most parts of the essay because of grammar and vocabulary mistakes. Please work on yourself