Creating effective sentences By: Muslima and Intizor

Creating effective sentences

By: Muslima and Intizor

Look at what not to do 

Run-on's

Fragment

Stringy sentences

Run-on Sentences....A bad thing!

What are they
Two complete sentences put together with no punctuations.
Example:I enjoy the weekends I love hanging out with my friends.
How can we fix this?
I enjoy the weekends ,and I love hanging out with my friends.
There are different ways!!!
Comma & Conjuction;
Semicolon
I enjoy the weekends: I love hanging out with my friends

A fragment does not give a whole sentence it's only a part of a sentence 

FRAGMENTS
Example:
Fragment
Comes to the country house. 
Framton comes to the country house. 
Talks to Vera.
Sentence
He talks to vera.
Is vera's aunt.
Mrs. Sappleton is Vera's aunt.
Vera about her ancle. 
Vera talks about her ancle.
Stringy sentences 

• A stringy sentence is when too many clauses with and,but,so, and because, connected sentences for forming one one or very long sentence. Stringy sentences are very so long that the reader forgets the beginning of the sentence before reaching the end.

For instance:
They came very quickly,and they didn't notice me,but I ran after them,so they saw me,and I got a sign from them.
Effective sentence sturucture
A combination of simple compound,and complex sentences. 
If sententences in a paragraph begin with the same opening subject,the writing becomes monotonous.
How can we create effective sentences???
4 Ways:
1.Create Images
2.Evoke Emotions
3.Make Promises
4.Practice Practice and Practice
Examples for effective sentences
1.I want to lose my weight,yet I eat chocolate daily.
2.She is very smart,and she knows it.
3.They wanted to go to Paris,but I wanted to see London.
4.I think you'd enjoy the party.I do not mind if you stay at home.
5.I saw an accident of a car.