Question: What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

Topic: online shopping is becoming more and more popular day by day
Question:What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?
1. Introduction
1. General background:
The Internet and technological advancements have enabled people to buy things online
2. Paraphrasing:
therefore, current people have a strong desire to purchase stuffs what they want online so as to avoid going to the store
3. Answering the question:
i think it has both benefits and drawbacks simultaneously.
Main body:
body 1, advantage 1
Online shopping provides people with a number of conveniences. Firstly, they can save their time which is spent on the road
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to be more precise,they can stay at home through ordering online shopping on the phone apps which are easy to use or just a call to concise phone number of the store. As they stay at home they do not stuck in a traffic jams and other crowded malls where require extra time consuming.
body 1, advantage 2
secondly, it does not require extra money
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if they do the shopping online, they do not go out for getting to the place where things are sold. therefore there is no need to ticket, toll and so forth
body 2, disadvantage 1
it has some drawbacks and especially common one is that they ordered things will not be as they expect.
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when their items have been delivered, there could be some deficiency among them. their size and color could not be the same as you choose in your online order.
disadvantage 2
Also one of the sad part of online shopping is they can not touch the product.
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If you do the shopping on the internet, you can not feel how it is and only you can see the image and description of your products. online shopping is not suitable for people who wish to buy the product by trying and touching it.
Conclusion
in conclusion, online shopping can give several benefits such as not wasting the valuable time and not spending extra money, however, it creates some drawbacks including the customer disappointment and impossible to touch.