4.
Development by space.
Carlos looked at the scene from the summit of Mt. Everest. In the distant north he saw Tibet. A bit closer, he saw some of the lower peaks of
the Himalayan range. On a ledge about 1,000 feet below him, he saw the figures of some of the men who had helped him prepare for his final
climb to the top.
One away to organize by space is to begin with the object that is farthest away from viewer and then in each sentence move gradually closer to
the point where the viewer is standing. Following the opening topic sentence on this paragraph, the three sentences do this.
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