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It is generally believed by many people that the Internet is the root of
people
’s seclusion from their society
(GIVING BACKGROUND
INFORMATION)
. From my perspective, this idea is completely flawed
owing to the benefits in terms of communication and knowledge
acquisition that the Internet offers
(GIVING A CLEAR ANSWER)
Firstly, I would argue that the Internet is one of the most powerful
facilitators in communication
(POINT).
At the moment, numerous
websites such as Facebook or Yahoo offer much faster and more
convenient services for users to keep in touch with their friends and
relatives regardless of geographic distance
(SPECIFIC EXAMPLE)
.
These websites create an online network which connects everyone
within their users
’ social circle and enables them to send instant
messages or to make video calls in a few seconds no matter where
they are. People, therefore, can enjoy both the convenience and the
swiftness that those services provide
(EXPLANATION).
Secondly, I believe the Internet has empowered people to acquire
more knowledge about their society than ever before
(POINT).
As a
matter of fact, it is able to bring every aspect of life to people, which I
think is valuable because people will have a closer look at how their
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