Alishеr navoiy ruboiylari tahlili f f. d., Sh. Sirojiddinov F. f n., G. Odilova

I represent a word that has no definition
Authentic, genuine pure than a soul of a chrsitian….
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Navoiy g‘azaliyoti misli bir ummon bu ummondagi durni olib chiqish uchun katta mahorat talab etiladi. Ruboiydagi “chuchuk” suvga nisbatan qo‘llanganmi yoki jongami muallif dahosigagina ayon. Ammo ingliz tilida “pure than a soul” iborasi qo‘llanganda misradagi ikki ma’noni ham ochib bera oladi. Zulqofiyatayn san’ati Navoiy she’rlarida eng ko‘p qo‘llanilgan badiiy usulardan hisoblanadi. Bunda she’r misralarida juft ohangdosh so‘zlar qofiya bo‘ladi. She’r misralaridagi so‘zlar ikki yoki undan ortiq marotaba takrorlanib kelsa takrir san’atini hosil qiladi. Agar bayt misralarida yondosh juft so‘zlar takrorlanib kelsa, mukarrar badiiy san’ati qo‘llanilgan bo‘ladi. E’tibor berilsa yuqorida keltirilgan barcha ruboiylarda keltirib o‘tilayotgan badiiy san’atlar ishlatilgan.

Is not better than soul, better than alive water,
If there is nothing better than that it is much dearest than alive water.

So‘zma-so‘z tarjimasi:

Jondan emas tiriklik suvidan shirin,
Agar undan azizroq bir narsa bo‘lmasa tiriklik suvidan azizroq.

Ko‘rib turganimizdek, shoir aytmoqchi bo‘lgan labing sharbati oldida “jon nima”, “tiriklik suvi nima” degan kuchli xis-hayajonga yo‘g‘irilgan o‘z fikridan qaytish ……. san’ati o‘rniga, tarjimada yana orttirma nisbat berish ko‘zga yaqqol tashlanmoqda.

Shu misrani quyidagicha tarjima qilsa maqsadga muvofiq bo‘ladi:

No compare better or not than soul and alive water

If there is the dearest its more better.

Tiriklik suvi yoki jondan yaxshiroq ekanligini muqoyasa qilib bo‘lmaydi

Nimaki eng aziz bo‘lsa o‘shandanda azizroq.

To dahrdurur, dahr uza sulton bo‘lg‘il,
To olam erur, olam uza xon bo‘lg‘il,
Davron elining jismida ham jon bo‘lg‘il,
Ham jonlarig‘a moyai darmon bo‘lg‘il.

Inglizcha tarjimasi:

Should there still be world, be you the king of this world.
Should there still be a kingdom be the ruler of this kingdom,
For the bodies of the people be their soul,
If the soul is sick, be balm to that sick soul.