Ielts-7-Writing

VOCABULARY
DEMOGRAPHICS: Statistics of a wide range of factors indicating the
quality of life in communities. These factors include births, deaths, age
distribution, mean income, physical distribution, and so on. Example:
The government will have a close look at the demographics of a
province when they decide on the number of schools that have to be
built in that province.
RURAL: Living or situated in a country, pastoral, or agricultural
(farming) situation.
URBAN: Living or situated in a city or town. Example: In the rural areas,
there is less pollution than in the urban areas.

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6.41 WILD ANIMALS
Wild animals have no place in the twenty-first century, and their
protection is a waste of resources. Do you agree or disagree?
Note: The words in parentheses are more advanced alternatives.
INTRODUCTION
The natural environment on our planet is often called “Mother Nature.” I
completely disagree with the statement and will give three reasons for my
view by referring to the psychological, social, and environmental aspects.
(34 words)
BODY
Psychologists have shown that contact with wild animals has a healing effect
on the human nervous system. They are even looking at the possibility that
other illnesses can be healed (cured) in this way. For example, in America,
Australia, Israel, and South Africa, bringing children into bodily (physical)
contact with dolphins and so exposing them to the voices of the animals have
reduced some disorders in children. The effect of physical contact with
elephants by children who were born blind is presently being looked at
(investigated).
It is said that people are socially better developed and can handle more
stress when they have some contact with wild animals. For instance, visiting
game reserves, wilderness areas, and zoos is becoming more and more
popular among city dwellers. In addition, bird-watching (amateur
ornithology) is fast becoming the most popular outdoor activity in the world.
Wild animals often play an important (crucial/vital) part in the protection of
the environment. In India and Africa, for example, vultures are known to
restrict the spread of diseases like anthrax among domestic cattle herds. (171
words)
CONCLUSION

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We have seen that wild animals have a positive influence in fields like
medicine, social development, and the environment. To remove wild animals
from our lives not only would be harmful (detrimental) to our existence on
this planet but could, in fact, be deadly (fatal). (43 words) (Total words:
248)