(Wrong use of “levelled off”. Levelled off means it reached
a steady rate without change. In this case there was
change, since it increased to 22) at 22 visitors in 2020.
Regarding school trip,- (grammatically incorrect.
“School Trip” is a reason given in the questionnaire. It
can’t be introduced by saying “Regarding”, since it is not
a topic we are going to discuss, it’s a response given by
people in a questionnaire.) 15 people chose it as their reason
in 2000. There was a significant increase to 22 visitors in
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2010 and then levelled off at 20 people in 2020. Looking at
work, the figure started at 10 people in 2000, then marginally
increased to 11 people in 2020. Lastly, it fell slightly again to
10 visitors in 2020.
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Full Sample Response 2
Here is what the sample answer looks like together:
The table illustrates the outcome of a survey conducted
with London Natural History Museum visitors to learn the
reasons for their visit.
The graphic/table compares four reasons for touring
the museum in 2000, 2010, and 2020, with the desire ‘to see
specific displays’ proving to be the most popular reason for
visiting in all three years. ‘Tourism’ saw the most significant
growth, followed by ‘School Trips,’ while ‘Work’ remained
relatively unchanged throughout.
‘Wanting to witness specific displays' presented a slight
decrease between 2000 and 2010, going from 52 to 48 as the
rest rose, but it grew again in the third interview, ending with
54 people. From 2010 to 2020, 'Work' and 'School trip'
dropped by 1 and 2, respectively.
Out of the four reasons, ‘Work’ was the least popular,
with minor fluctuations between 10 and 11 across the three
interviews, while 'Tourism' showed the most dramatic climb,
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