How to Write a Band 9 IELTS Process
Description
This chapter outlines the thought processes
and structure needed to
answer an IELTS Process Description question, and the elements that need
to be included to achieve the best possible band score for your writing.
Example Question:
The diagram illustrates how bees produce honey.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main
features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
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Step 1- Understand the Process
The first sentence tells us what is shown in the diagram, but we must
take time to look at the diagram itself to fully understand what happens in
the process.
REMEMBER: we cannot describe something if we do not
understand it!
THOUGHT PROCESS FOR THE EXAMPLE:
The
diagram tells us (illustrates) how bees make (produce)
honey
The diagram has numbers and arrows, so it is easy to see the
beginning and end of the process
There are
not many words on the diagram, so we must use
the pictures to help
There are some words explained underneath the diagram, so
they must be important!
Basic Process Outline:
Picture 1 – bees live in a hive
Picture 2 – bees fly around and visit flowers
Picture 3 – bees collect nectar from each flower
Picture 4 – the nectar is left/deposited/transferred
into cells inside
the hive
Picture 5 – bees flap their wings which causes/creates movement of
air/ air movement
Picture 6 – water evaporates from the nectar
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