Ielts writing proficiency Task ielts academic + ielts general Writing Task Includes ielts writing Samples for Task in ielts academic Training & ielts gen

 
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BASIC STRUCTURE
Think about possible alternative phrases and synonyms to
rewrite the first sentence of the question
Think about how I will describe the whole process
Identify the main features of the process
Plan what information my paragraphs will include.
Paragraph
1
Introduction
Rewrite the first sentence of the
question
Paragraph
2
Overview
Describe the whole process
Paragraph
3
First main
feature
Bees are outside collecting nectar
Paragraph
4
Second main
feature
What happens when the bees
return to the hive
 
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Step 3- Describe
It is important to follow your plan (introduction, overview, main
features) to stay focused on the question.
REMEMBER: you only have 20 minutes, so stay focused and stick
to your plan.
THOUGHT PROCESS:
There are certain things that we must include in our writing to make
sure that we get the best mark that we can.
 
HOW 
TO 
EVALUATE 
YOUR 
OWN 
PROCESS
DESCRIPTION
DESCRIPTORS
CONTENT
EXAMPLES/ACTION
Task Response
 
I have fully addressed all
the parts of the task and done
everything I have been asked
to do.
Read the question
carefully.
Check that you have done
everything that you were
asked to do.
Coherence and
Cohesion
 
I have used cohesion so that
my description reads smoothly
and is sequenced effectively.
I have used paragraphing
effectively.
Use sequencing
vocabulary, e.g., first, next,
after that, finally, etc.
Use linking words/phrases,
e.g., because, in order to,
whenever, as a result, etc.
Check that you have used
these.