In recent times, many young people have become less social and stay inside more often. What are the causes of this? How can young people be enabled or encouraged to interact with the outside world more?

What are the reasons for this?
What can be done to fix this problem?
In conclusion, indeed driving offences have become a major challenge all around the world.
There is too much noise in many public places in cities.
What are the causes of this problem?
What can be done to solve the problem?

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Not all drivers obey the laws while driving on roads.
What are the reasons for this?
What can be done to fix this problem?
ARGUMENT 1
some drivers do not understand road regulations
ARGUMENT 2
most young people want to show off themselves
ARGUMENT 1
increase control of lessons at driving schools and make road
exams transparent
ARGUMENT 2
increase the amount of fine and age limit
This tendency is happening mainly due to popularity of fast food and passive lifestyle, and I feel that measures such as following a healthy diet and doing active sports can help to overcome this issue.
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This tendency is mainly/primarily/mostly due to lack of knowledge and boastful behavior, and I am of the view that measures such as restrictions and fair exams can help address the problem.
There is too much noise in many public places in cities.
What are the causes of this problem?
What can be done to solve the problem?


ARGUMENT 1
The main reason of excessive noise in public places is higher number of cars on the city roads.
ARGUMENT 2
Another issue is that people use a range of technological devices when they are in public places.
ARGUMENT 1
First of all, officials should make stricter rules regarding noise levels in roads near public areas