In recent times, many young people have become less social and stay inside more often. What are the causes of this? How can young people be enabled or encouraged to interact with the outside world more?

ARGUMENT 2
In addition, the use of devices in public places ought to be restricted by the governments.

because,
if, by

Many students find it difficult to focus or pay attention at school nowadays.
What are the reasons for this?
What can be done to solve this problem?
ARGUMENT 1
First of all, in many schools the lessons are not interesting.
ARGUMENT 2
What is more, schoolchildren are sometimes distracted by modern technologies.
ARGUMENT 1
The most obvious measure is that officials should change old-fashioned teaching methods at schools to modern ones.
ARGUMENT 2
Another solution is that all electronic devices have to be banned inside the school.
This trend is occurring because the lessons are not interesting and technology distracts students, and I feel that by altering teaching methods and prohibiting gadgets the issue can be effectively addressed.
if officials alter teaching methods and prohibit gadgets the issue can be effectively addressed.

In conclusion, indeed, the problem of obesity is a serious challenge for many societies and this is happening due to the popularity of fast food and passive lifestyle. Unless people follow a healthier diet and start doing a more active sport, the problem will exacerbate even further.
UNLESS
People should follow a healthier diet and start doing active sports, otherwise the issue will get worse.
OTHERWISE
Some old people today struggle with the use of modern technologies such as smartphones and computers.
What is the cause of this? What are some possible solutions?


ADVANTAGE DISADVANTAGE
Step 1
the problem of subject verb agreement
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children is