People often do not interact with their neighbours and this is harming community building. What are causes and solution?
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- I think it is a positive trend overall (CLEAR POSITION) . The main
Do you think this a positive or
negative development? In today’s modern world online shops are surpassing high-street shops. What mainly attracts people to online shopping is the opportunity to save time and money (B1) and the availability of a wide range of products offered (B2). Although shopping on the Internet aggravates the problem of unemployment (B3 – REFUTE), I think it is a positive trend overall (CLEAR POSITION). The main advantage of ecommerce is that it enables customers to shop without having to travel to a shop, which certainly saves their time and money spent on transportation. Many people today work long hours, thus hardly make time to visit stores. Online shopping is exactly what they need because they are freed from going to shops and carrying products home. The ability to buy diverse products which are not available in one’s city or country is another benefit of online shopping which appeals to many people. At present, renowned companies which produce high-quality items offer online sales and delivery to many countries. For example, my friend recently bought an up-to-date camera on Amazon.com, which is the largest online store in the world, saying that / meaning the ones in our local shops are limited in range and they are slightly older versions as well. However, it is undeniable that many employees are made redundant when the company they work for are converted to an online business. Employers no longer need workers to advertise their products and to make contracts with shoppers as these functions are automatically completed on a computer. As a result, the number of jobless people is increasing, which is a financial burden on the economy of a country. In conclusion, I regard online shopping as a quite positive trend which facilitates our current life. Admittedly, this phenomenon adds to the problem of unemployment, but it is an indicator of changing lifestyles and we need to adapt to these changes in response. Some people say that regular safety courses for drivers are the best way to improve driving standards. Others think that strict punishments are more effective. Download 94.53 Kb. Do'stlaringiz bilan baham: |
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