Some practice in translation

National Character of Stylistic Systems
The Stylistic System of a language like its phonetic system, grammatical system and lexical system, bear a distinct National Character.
Stylistic devices in different languages are, in the main similar but their functioning in each language, their specific weight and the frequency of their use are widely different. This fact accounts for the necessity of Stylistic Transformations – Substitution and Compensation. By means of lexical transformations and grammatical transformations the translator achieves an equivalent rendering of the lexical meaning and grammatical meaning of a word or a form. The same principle is valid when rendering the Stylistic meaning of the message, that is, reproducing a similar effect in the TL text, arousing a similar response on the part of the TL reader as well was called forth by the SL text. The translator, however, is often compelled to achieve the intended effect by a different device.
“… a blockbuster of a novel. Each chapter leaves the reader banging and eager for more”.
Сногсшибательный роман! После каждой главы читатель напряженно ждет продолжения.
The reversed Epithet is translated by a Russian Epithet which is equally colloquial and expressive. Although the Semantic aspect is not preserved, the 2 epithets may be regarded as equivalents because they possess a common Seme, namely “to knock down”.
Sometimes the English and the Russian Epithet which appear to be correlated because of their Semantic likeness and because of possessing the same degree of triteness are far from being Equivalents as they provoke different Connotations, for example, toothy – зубастый. The former describes a physical feature, while the latter reveals a moral quality.
To the puzzlement of the man speaking to her, she broke into a wide, toothy, unprovoked grin. (C.P.Snow).
К изумлению говорившего с ней человека она неожиданно широко улыбнулась, сверкнув зубами.
The Epithet is compensated by the expressiveness of the verb.
It should also be borne in mind that Stylistic devices which seem to be identical may have different functional values in the SL and TL. In order to achieve a comparable effect another device should be employed. Repetition may illustrate this point. For example, the five-fold repetition of the word “stop”.
“Stop! Stop! Stop! Stop! Stop!” in Thomas Hardy’s story “Absent-mindedness in a Parish Choir” is compensated lexically by the introduction of conditional words possessing the same degree of expressiveness.
Stop! Stop! Stop! Stop! Stop! (T. Hardy)
Перестаньте! Сию минуту перестаньте! Да перестаньте же!
The Emphatic effect of repetition in the following example is made up by the use of a Synonymous pair and by the addition of an intensifier.
A policy of see no stagnation, hear no stagnation, speak no stagnation has had too long a run for our money.
Слишком долго мы расплачиваемся за политику полного игнорирования и замалчивания застоя в нашей экономике.
Another instance of Stylistic substitution in translation is well illustrated by K.Chukovsky’s translation of the Alliterative title of Oskar Wild’s essay “Pen, Pencil and Poison” by a rhythmical arrangement of correlated words: “Кисть, перо и отрава”. The same principle appears in another variant of translation: “Яд, перо и карандаш”.