Transscript of the speaking Part 2

Transscript of the speaking Part 2

Describe an important invention that you think has positively influenced the human race.
You should say:

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  What the invention is
  
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  Who invented it
  
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  What changes it brought
  

and explain how it has positively influenced the human race.
I would like to say something about the compass it is considered as one of the greatest inventions in the old China and actually it was invented in the Chinchu Dynasty in the ancient China and it was invented for the need of war cause it was very useful for navigation it is work it worked it works through the magnetic gravity of the globe it has a small pin in it and the pin always points to the souths direction so that you can navigated navigates through it and I think it had an breakthrough effect in human history cause when it was brought to the Europe it helped to begin a new era of ???? I believe that it help Colombo to sailed across the whole Antarctic ocean and then eventually find American continents and since then the humans' history of connection has began and the whole world changed. That's all thank you

Band descriptors feedback

Fluency and Coherence

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   YOU SPEAK FLUENTLY partially, you can speak a little fluent, but basic
   
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      YOU USE COMPLEX SPEECH FLUENTLY no, you use basic language to express yourself
      
   2. 
      YOU USE SIMPLE SPEECH FLUENTLY partially, you can talk about something simple with some form of fluency
      
   3. 
      YOU DON’T SPEAK TOO SLOW no, you can speak a bit faster
      
2. 
   YOU AVOID REPETITIONS no, there are still some repetions
   
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      YOUR REPETITIONS ARE CONTENT BASED AND NOT LANGUAGE BASED No, the repetions are language based as you are searching to use the correct tense forms
      
3. 
   YOU AVOID PAUSES: no, there are still a lot of pauses
   
4. 
   YOU DO NOT USE AUTO CORRECTIONS no, you still use some auto correction
   
5. 
   YOU USE DISCOURSE MARKERS AND COHESIVE DEVICES WELL partially, you use some discourse markers and cohesive devices, but you could use more
   
6. 
   YOU CAN SPEAK AT LENGTH partially, you can fill the 2 minutes but there are still a lot of pauses and repetions, plus you use basic language to try to speak at lenght
   
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      YOU CAN SPEAK AT LENGTH ABOUT ANY TOPIC, not applicable as you only spoke about 1 topic
      

Lexical Resource

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   YOU USE A WIDE RANGE OF VOCABULARY partially, you use mostly basic expression to talk about the topic apart from some more advanced ones here and there
   
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      YOU USE YOUR VOCABULARY FLEXIBLY partially you still struggle here and there to say exacly what you mean
      
   2. 
      YOU CAN CONVEY PRECISE MEANING partially the words you use can convay precise meaning but you can use more complex vocabulary to talk about the topic
      
   3. 
      YOU USE LESS COMMON IDIOMATIC LANGUAGE no, you use here and there some more complex language but not really idiomatic
      
   4.