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Sample Answer 96
 
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The line graph shows the average temperature during the hottest part 
of the day in Australia in 2007
 
 
 
The line graph shows changes in median highest temperatures in 5 cities in Australia 
in different seasons in 2007.
Throughout the graph, Darwin was always the hottest place, with an average 
temperature of 34 degrees Celsius in summer. Darwin was also notable in that the fall 
in temperature between summer and autumn was the smallest decrease between 
seasons of any of the cities that year, sinking to only about 33 degrees.
Cairns and Perth were the next warmest cities shown, although Perth was markedly 
cooler than Perth in autumn and winter, falling to approximately 19 degrees in the 
coolest season.
Sydney and Adelaide had similar temperatures in summer and autumn, with only a 
degree between them, but in winter, Adelaide fell below Sydney to become the 
coldest place illustrated. Sydney, Adelaide and Perth all had comparable temperatures 
in spring.
Overall, it can be seen that in 2007, temperatures in these cities in Australia ranged 
from approximately 34 degrees to 15 degrees at their average hottest point.
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Sample Answer 97
 
IELTS 
JOURNAL
 
97
 
 
The table shows the number of people in Canada in each earning level
 
 
 
The table details income levels in Canada and how many citizens were included in 
each income bracket from 2005 to 2009.
In 2005, the number of people in each income level reduced the higher the income, 
with nearly 10 million earning $20,000 or less, falling to only slightly above one third 
of a million earning over $150,000.
By 2006, the pattern changed as the number of people with the lowest income fell by 
nearly one quarter, whereas those earning between $20,000 and $50,000 increased 
by almost one million and those in the next income level increased dramatically to over 
7 million. There was also an increase in the number of people in the highest income 
bracket, which rose by over 50,000.
In 2007, the largest increase in numbers was observed in those earning between
$50,000 and $100,000, and in 2008 and 2009, figures remained relatively stable, with 
those earning between $20,000 and $50,000 representing the majority.
Overall, there were variations in the number of people in each income level.