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Sample answers for Writing tasks
TEST 6, W R I T I N G TASK 1 
SAMPLE ANSWER
This is an answer written by a candidate who achieved a Band 7.0 score. Here is the 
exam iner’s comment:
The candidate covers all the key features and presents a clear overview of the 
developments planned. Information and ideas are logically organised and there is 
a clear progression throughout the response. A range of cohesive devices is used 
flexibly 
[currently
| 
Overall
| 
First of all
| 
therefore
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Moreover
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The next point
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To 
sum up].
Lexical choice shows flexibility and precision, and includes less common 
items 
[modifications
| 
predicting
| 
grouped in a shopping mall],
though there is some 
inappropriate word choice 
[deserves].
A range of grammatical structures is used 
flexibly and accurately and error-free sentences are frequent.
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