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DISCUSSION ESSAY:

TOPIC: SOME PEOPLE ARGUE THAT A VEGETARIAN DIET IS THE HEALTHIEST OPTION WHILE OTHERS BELIVE THAT A BALANCED DIET INCLUIDING MEAT IS NECESSARY FOR GOOD HEALTH.

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  IDEA 1: MEAT ENHANCES INDIVIDUALS MUSCLE STRENGTH
  
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  IDEA 2: A VEGEAN DIET FUARANTEES PEOPLE’S WELL-BEING
  

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  INTRODUCTION: HAVING A VEGETARIAN DIET IS CLAIMED TO BE THE HEALTHIEST CHOICE FOR SOME; OTHERS, HOWEVER, DISAGREE WITH IT SAYING THAT DIETS THAT INVOLVE MEAT ARE CRUICAL FOR A HEALTHY LIFESTYLE. EVEN THOUGH VEGETARIAN DIET ENSURES INDIVIDUALS WELL-BEING, MEAT INTENSIFIES PEOPLE’S MUSCLE STRENGTH (PERSONALLY, I SUPPORT THE LATTER SIDE AS MEAT INTENSIFIES PEOPLE’S MUSCLE STRENGTH.)
  

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  TOPIC SENTENCE 1: SOME THINK THAT BY CONSUMING MEALS THAT INVOLVE MEAT WE CAN EHNACE THEIR BONES DENSITY. THIS IS BECAUSE MEAT IS CONSIDERED TO BE A RICH SOURCE OF HIGH-QUALITY PROTEIN THAT CONTAINS ALL THE ESSETIAL ELEMENTS.WHENEVER INDIVIDUALS CONSUME A DIET THAT IS HIGH IN PROTEIN, IT HELPS THEM BUILD STRONG BONES AND DECREASES RISK OF FRACTURES. EX
  

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  TOPIC SENTENCE 2: OTHERS, HOWEVER, CLAIM THAT A VEGAN DIET GUARANTEES INDIVIDUAL’S HEALTH CONSCIOUSNESS (WELL-BEING). THIS TYPE OF DIET CONSISTS OF ONLY ORGANIC FOODS WHICH ARE HEALTHY FOR CONSUMPTION. ONCE PEOPLE START EATING THESE PRODUCTS REGULARLY, THEY FORM A NEW HABIT.HAVING FORMED THIS HABIT, THEY WILL BE COMPLETELY RESTRICTED FROM EATING PROCESSED FOOD AND WILL BE MORE CONSICOUS ABOUT THEIR HEALTH.FUTHERMORE, THE VEGETARIAN DIET DEMANDS PEOPLE TO EXERCISE EVERY SINGLE DAY WHICH GUARANTEES THEIR WELL-BEING,AFTER ALL.