Opinion essay: correction = pink

OPINION ESSAY: correction = pink

TOPIC: TRADITIONAL MEDICINE AND ALTERNATIVE THERAPIES ARE JUST AS EFFECTIVE AS MODERN MEDICAL TREATMENTS.

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  MAIN IDEA 1: DEALING WITH STRESS => helps them identify root and consequences of tension
  
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  once trigger is found => people change their health behavior and learn some ways dealing with it.
  
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  MAIN IDEA 2: ENHANCING MOOD (HAPINESS) => initially people suffer from diseases and mood disorders which convince them to take therapies => after taking therapies they relieve anxiety => it improves their positive emotions.
  

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  INTRODUCTION: IT IS STATED THAT CLASSICAL MEDICINE AND THERAPIES HAVE THE SAME EFFECTIVENESS AS EVIDENCE-BASED MEDICINES. I TOTALLY CONCUR WITH THIS IDEA BECAUSE UTILIZING THESE BASIC REMEDIES HELP (HELPS ) INDIVIDUALS DEAL WITH TENSION AND ENHANCE THEIR MOOD(HAPPINESS).
  

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  TOPIC SENTENCE 1 : THE PRIMARY REASON WHY TRADITIONAL TREATMENTS ARE JUST AS USEFUL AS CURRENT MEDICAL THERAPIES IS THAT THESE BASIC MEDICINES MAY ASSIST PEOPLE BY DEALING WITH STRESS. PEOPLE ARE HELPED TO IDENTIFY THE MAIN ROOT AND CONSEQUENCE OF THEIR STREES SINCE THEY HAVE TAKEN BASIC REMEDIES. ONCE THE TRIGGERS ARE FOUND, PEOPLE START CHANGING THEIR HEALTH BEHAVIOR AND LEARN HOW TO DEAL WITH TENSION WHENEVER THEY ARE COMFRONTED.
  

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  TOPIC SENTENCE 2 : (AS REGARDS ALTERNATIVE REMEDIES,) THE OTHER REASON WHY I SEE THEM AS POSITIVE SINCE THEY ARE BELIEVED TO BE GOOD MOOD-ENHANCERS. INDIVIDUALS FIRST SUFFER FROM HEALTH PROBLEMS AND MOOD DISORDERS. AFTER ALL, THESE ISSUES CONVINCE THEM TO TAKE MEDICAL TREATMENTS. AFTER RECEIVING MEDICAL TREATMENTS, THEY ARE MORE RELIEVED FROM THESE PRESSURES, WHICH IMPROVE THEIR POSITIVE EMOTIONS.