Opinion essay: correction = pink

ADVANTAGE/DISADVANTAGE ESSAY:

TOPIC: ONLINE SHOPPING HAS BECOME MORE POPULAR THAN TRADITIONAL SHOPPING IN PHYSICAL STORES.

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  ADVANTAGE: CHEAPER
  
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  DISADVANTAGE: THE QUALITY OF PRODUCT IS NOT ALWAYS GUARANTEED AND THE POSSIBILITY OF BEING SCAMMED.
  

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  INTRODUCTION: A DISTANCE SHOPPING HAS GAINED A QUICK POPULARITY COMPARED TO TRADITIONAL SHOPPING. ALTHOUGH SUCH WAY OF PURCHASING MAY SOMETIMES BE UNRELIABLE DUE TO PRODUCT’S QUALITY, I CLAIM THAT INDIVIDUALS OUGHT TO BE ENCOURAGED TO BUY THINGS ONLINE BECAUSE THEY ARE AT LOW PRICES AND LESS TIME-CONSUMING ( PRODUCTS THAT ARE BOUGHT THROUGH ONLINE STORES TAKE LESS TIME THAN TRADITIONAL ONES.)
  

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  TOPIC SENTENCE 1: A DISADVANTAGE OF BUYING PRODUCTS ONLINE IS THAT THEY WILL ALWAYS BE OF HIGH QUALITY. THIS IS BECAUSE WHEN PEOPLE LOOK FOR PRODUCTS ONLINE, THEY ENCOUNTER VARIETY OF WEBSITES WHERE THINGS ARE OFTEN OFFERED DIFFERENTLY, EITHER AT A LOW PRICE OR AT A HIGH QUALITY. BECAUSE THEY DO NOT KNOW WHETHER PRODUCTS ARE RELIABLE OR NOT, THEY END UP CHOOSING THE WRONG THINGS. PEOPLE DO NOT USUALLY ENSURE CONSEQUENCES OF ONLINE SHOPPING WHEN THEY DECIDE TO PURCHASE THINGS AND THEY ARE OFTEN REQUIRED TO DO A PAYMENT BEFOREHAND WHICH HAS POSSIBILITY OF BEING SCAMMED.
  
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  TOPIC SENTENCE 2: NEVERTHELESS, COMPANIES THAT CARRY OUT INTERNET BUYING (SELLING) MAY ATRRACT NEW CUSTOMERS BY SELLING THINGS CHEAPER, WHICH PULLS THE OVERALL BALANCE IN FAVOR OF DOING DISTANCE SHOPPING.THIS IS MOSTLY BECAUSE OF THE BENEFITS TECHNOLOGICAL ADVANCEMENTS OFFER.NOWADAYS, THE MAJORITY OF COMPANIES USE SOCIAL MEDIA PLATFORMS WHERE THEY STORE THEIR PRODUCTS CHEAPER AND PROVIDE THEIR CUSTOMERS WITH GOOD SERVICES.BY DOING THESE THINGS, COMPANIES USUALLY FIND IT EASY TO ATTRACT NEW CUSTOMERS AND BUILD UP A STRONG RELATIONSHIP WITH THEM.