Writing Test
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ARCO
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SAT II Subject Tests
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The sentence is incorrect because clauses cannot be spliced together using only a comma. If you
want to join two main clauses, you can use a conjunction (such as
and )
plus a comma or semicolon or
even just a semicolon. The sentence above could have been written: “After months of separation, Gauguin
finally joined Van Gogh in Arles in October of 1888, but he left a few weeks later.”
2. Semicolons
One use of the semicolon has already been mentioned: use a semicolon between main clauses linked
by a coordinate conjunction (
and, but, etc.) when the main clauses are complex; e.g., when they them-
selves contain commas. (See above.) Another use of semicolons is to separate
two main clauses that are
not linked by a coordinate conjunction.
EXAMPLES:
He grew up on a farm in Nebraska; he is now the captain of a Navy ship.
The Smithtown players cheered the referee’s decision; the Stonybrook players booed it.
Notice
that in these examples, each clause separated by the semicolon could stand alone as an
independent sentence:
He grew up on a farm in Nebraska. He is now the captain of a Navy ship.
The Smithtown players cheered the referee’s decision. The Stonybrook players booed it.
Unless each clause can function as an independent sentence, it probably is wrong to use a semicolon.
When
John entered the room; everyone stood up.
Clem announced that the prize would be donated to Harbus House; a well-known charity.
The semicolons in the examples above are used incorrectly. Notice that the elements separated by
the semicolons cannot stand as independent sentences. These sentences can
be corrected by using com-
mas in place of the semicolons.
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