Ielts essay Clinic Targeted Feedback pdf 2 Your Main Body Paragraphs


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3 Targets 
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Topic Sentence 
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Explanation
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Example
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Topic Sentence Checklist
I have only 1 idea in my topic sentence. 
The topic sentence clearly answers the first 
question. 
The topic sentence clearly helps the reader 
understand the main point of the paragraph. 
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Use the checklist to analyse the student 
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Topic Sentence 
Student sample
Obviously, people seem to know all about an area in which they bring up. They 
grow while exploring their surroundings, listening stories from their elders, 
and reading and studying literature of their native regions. So, being 
contented, they find such archives or chronicle areas as vapid and always keep 
aspiring to explore something different. For instance, People from all over the 
world show keen interest in visiting historical monument, Taj Mahal, one of the 
seven wonders of the world, that is in Agra. But, localites here hardly visit to 
this mausoleum and moreover often involve in activities which spoils the 
beauty of the place or the monument.
Examiner Feedback- No clear topic sentence making it difficult to understand if 
response addresses the question or not. 
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